Thursday, 22 November 2012

Feedback on trailer progress 2

From the feedback I collected on wall wisher, it shows that it definitely improved from the first draft but to improve it further, suggestions such as making certain scenes shorter and choppier to make it more conventional and to add on screen text to make the plot of the film clearer.

From that I decided to make certain scenes shorter and to come up with effective on screen text which would explain the plot better but not give it all away.

Claudia and I watched existing horror-thriller film trailers for inspiration.


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