Feedback on trailer progress 1

From the feedback that we collected on wall wisher we have what our target audience thought was good and what could be improved.

"I like how music runs almost all the way through the whole trailer as it creates something like a theme song which would be easily recognised if advertised on tv etc"

"The music gives the trailer an eerie atmosphere but there are some scenes that are too long which slows the pace down. It did have some fast paced editing near the end but it as an anti-climatic feel to it."




"The music used at the end complimented the action within the clips very well but some scenes seemed so randomly put together"




"It scenes are randomly put together, even though the majority of it flows I got slightly confused with the possible plot of the film"




"Some really good camera angles but the editing could be more fast paced to give it more of an impending doom atmosphere"




The majority of the people who gave us feedback commented on anti-climatic ending, the scenes seeming out of place in certain places and the fact that the editing could be faster paced. To improve this we came up with ideas to make it more dramatic at the end. For inspiration, everyone in the group watched existing horror-thriller film trailers.

Storyboards of new scenes: