Scene
1
EXT-NIGHT-: Small woods near a local park.
Long grass over grown weeds, man made trail created by people disturbing the
area. Isolated and quiet
Mai- casual wear (hoodie, jeans)
Dead girl-white dress, bare dirty feet
Mai (main character) is walking her dog as
she would any other day. The dog is acting strange, barks wildly and runs off.
Mai follows the dog and discovers the body.
MAI
(Gasping,
stopping herself from screaming, crying)
Runs
away (footsteps and panting)
Scene
2
INT-DAY-:stereotypical home
Mai returns home from school and sees
similar white dress to the one that was on the girl’s dead body
Mai-casual clothing, backpack
MUM
(Confused)
What’s wrong?
MAI
(Without
looking at her mum, blank look in her eyes)
[Stutters
and hesitates]
Nothing
Scene
3
INT-NIGHT-:Inside Mai’s bedroom,
stereotypical bedroom with a girly touch, sleeping with her door open. The
white dress her mum showed her is hanging on the doorframe.
Mai-In pajamas
Mai finds it hard to fall asleep.
Inside
Mai’s dream:
EXT-NIGHT-: same location she found the
body of a dead girl
Mai dreams of being killed by hanging
MAI
(Twisting
and turning in bed, gasping for air, panting, cold sweat)
Mai wakes up with bruising and scratches on
her wrists.
Scene
4
INT-DAY-: Inside Mai’s bedroom
Mai chose to wear a short sleeve t-shirt,
when looking in the mirror she realizes about the bruises and scratches. Mai in
a hurry grabs a jumper/cardigan and rushes down the stairs and head for the
door
INT: Living room of Mai’s house
MUM
Eat
some breakfast before you leave
(As
Mai opens the door)
MAI
(Calling
to her)
-Sigh-
(When
Mai shuts the door)
Scene
5
EXT-DAY-:Outside of Mai’s house
Mai not looking where she was going bumps
into someone in the street and exposes her bruising. Mai quickly moves her
sleeves back down.
STRANGER+MAI
Sorry
(at the same time)
MAI
Ahh…
No it was my fault I should have been looking where I was going
(Helping
the stranger up from the ground)
STRANGER
No
no, don’t worry about it
(Kind
warm smile)
Mai continues to go to school and
everything for the rest of the day was normal.
Scene
6
INT-DAY-: Mai’s home
Mai returns home after school to find out
about the death of the stranger she bumped into this morning.
MAI
I’m
home
MUM
I
noticed (sarcasm)
How
was your day?
MAI
It
was okay
MUM
Did
you hear about the hanging?
MAI
(Stutter)
err…what hanging?
MUM
That
woman, they think she killed herself but it doesn’t look much like suicide
(Mai
with a worried look on her face, she thinks her mum found out about the body
she discovered that night)
Err…
down _________street/road
(Mum
shows Mai the news article on iPad)
Scene
7
INT-NIGHT-: Mai’s bedroom
Mai-Pajamas different to the time before
Mai experiences the dream again (snippets
of previous dream)
MAI
(Twisting
and turning, gasping for air, panting, cold sweat)
Mai wakes up with bruising on her neck as
well as her wrists this time.
Mai walks down the stairs with a
jumper/cardigan as well as a scarf on.
MUM
Why
are you wearing a scarf in this weather?
(Confused)
MAI
(Hesitate)
errr…I’m not feeling well
[Pause]
Can
I stay home today?
MUM
Mai,
the world doesn’t stop just because you’re not feeling well
MAI
Please mum
Please mum
(Desperate
look on her face)
MUM
-Sigh-
if you must
Scene
8
INT-DAY-: Bathroom, shower booth, home
alone
Mai taking a shower (humming to herself)
sees figure/face through steamed up glass. Mai wipes the glass and find there
is nothing there.
Scene
9
INT-DAY-: Mai’s bedroom
Mai is drying her hair after the shower,
her phone rings and she picks it up.
Mai’s friend wondering why she wasn’t at
school today.
FRIEND
Ah,
you little skiver, you are alive then?
MAI
(Awkward
laugh to try and hide her worry)
Yeah,
just feeling a bit crap
Friend
You
all right? You sound a bit weird
MAI
(Spacey)
I
was there…the bruises…it was an accident…he could sense it…the dress…I saw
it…she’s after me, help me, HELP ME!
[Phone
line is dead]
Scene
10
INT-DAY-: In her bedroom
Mai rocking herself back and forth in the
corner while mumbling a nursery rhyme.
Scene
11
EXT-NIGHT-: the location Mai discovered the
body
Lower body of the dead girl hanging,
swinging, creaking
[THE HANGING]
close up of dead girls face with her eyes
closed then suddenly open and cut to
black screen.
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